Chapter 3 of "The Aventures Of Ramon The Hedgehog:LOL Bowser's Castle"

MikeWeathersby546 as Stario
darkthehedgehog53 as Dark The Hedgehog
sonicshadow999 as Himself
MarioMaster123123123(thats me LOL) as Ramon The Hedgehog (thats the hedgehog i created)
blaze432 as Sirena The Hedgehog
Jordian as Shadow The Hedgehog (Blaze432's cousin)
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Ramon:god this is taking tooooooooooooooo long and am very lazy like always
sonicshadow999:LOL
Dark:who teh fuck are you
sonicshadow999:not eggman of course
Sirena:nice to meet you sonicshadow
sonicshadow999:nice to meet you too sirena
Shadow:so are we going or not?
Sirena:hi shadow *blushes*
Shadow:hi sirena (sigh just STFU and GTFO)
Stario:enough shit OKAY

*LOL BOWSER'S CASTLE*
Ramon:LOL weres the big green old shitty ass shoving turtle
Sirena:thats a mouth full
bowser:thats chaos emerald is mine and its not yours....NA NA NA NA NA NA
Dark:then shove it up your ass NA NA NA NA NA NA
Ramon:shut the fuck up NA NA NA NA NA NA
sonicshadow:give the stinkin emerald back or behold my super punch and go to hell
bowser:Lol make me
sonicshadow:KA.....ME......KA.......ME .......HA!!!!!!!!(LOL DBZ)
bowser:COURSE...YOU..............AND YOUR WALLET
Ramon:*gets the emerald*
Stario:6 Crystal Stars to go
sonicshadow:and 6 Chaos Emealds to go

*ON RAMON'S HOUSE*
Ramon:Pizza is on me tonight!
Sirena:yay thanks ramon
Ramon:is the best i can do for a lovely ladie
Sirena:thanks
Eggman:i'll be ordering the "your going to hell pizza" with a "you suck" table please

Eggman arrives at Ramon's house with he's shitty mind
what are our heroes do?
stay tune for T.A.O.R.T.H.'s Chapter 4

End Of Chapter

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Kitten-of-Annoyance 2009-03-07 12:52:57

I find it hilarious how you take this seriously.
this "story" (I don't even think it can be called that) is shit, its poorly written, has no actual detail in it, and the dialogue is nothing like the way people actually speak.

get an original thought of your own, or people worse then me will troll your page. Welcome to the internet: if you don't like it or you can't handle people doing worse then what I've said then gfto sonicfag.

MARIOMASTER123123123 2009-03-07 12:52:57

uselly i made my stories to be a bit funny and if you dont think is original or any other shit then GTFO and kiss the floor and go home

Kitten-of-Annoyance 2009-03-07 13:05:09

I'd rather not. this story sucks. Sonic sucks. and your probably a closet furry, I pity you. I really do.

MARIOMASTER123123123 2009-03-07 13:05:09

so i dont care about you
i care about the people who liked it

Kitten-of-Annoyance 2009-03-07 13:24:43

well then you care about no one, the people who say they liked it are lying because they are attention whores who will do anything for someone give them attention-thus the name.

MARIOMASTER123123123 2009-03-07 13:24:43

MikeWeathersby546
darkthehedgehog53
sonicshadow999
blaze432
Jordian

like the story
talk to them and tell this